Edit review request
Edit review request
This edit has added some good wording on communal innovation, but the section "Encourage Innovation" is a bit fragmented as a result (comunal innovation is mentioned in both paragraphs and flow is not ideal). Copyediting needed.
Everything looks good to me. I took a look at this section and made a small tweak to improve flow. (e.g.: first paragraph identifies problem, second paragraph focuses on solutions) But feel free to make further adjustments to get to where we need to be.