Edit review request

Everything looks good to me. I took a look at this section and made a small tweak to improve flow. (e.g.: first paragraph identifies problem, second paragraph focuses on solutions) But feel free to make further adjustments to get to where we need to be.

Randomran16:04, 6 July 2010

Main one I spotted is the platform isn't what's remained static. the modes of interaction, or interaction method, or approach to interaction, is what's stayed static. May be better wording for this? Also reversed sentence order to state what is needed, then why (not the other way round).

FT2 (Talk | email)16:46, 6 July 2010